Ich hab ein Lied geschrieben und wollt ma eure Meinung wissen.
All alone
I lay here broken on the floor
nobodys here to heal my pain.
Where`s the joy and the happines?
Where are the laughter that once surrounding me?
Their gone with the wind like anyone else.
The only thing that still remains is the silence that chokes
me so hard I cannot breath.
Refr.
And now I´m standing here all alone thinkin of past times.
I whipe away all my tears and realize
I am left all alone and no one seems to care.
The love i felt, now a ghost in the past.
The emptiness inside which slowly kills the hope.
Now the tears run down my face and get lost in the rain.
The light in the dark now forever is gone away.
The razorblade calls my name and I will let it go.
Refr.
And now I´m standing here all alone thinkin of past times.
I whipe away all my tears and realize
I am left all alone and no one seems to care.
And now I´m lying here all alone
bleeding out my wound.
I´d whiped away all my tears and realized
I had gone all alone and no one seems to care.
geschrieben von: DarkHope
Also ich finde das richtig gut. Man kann förmlich den Schmerz fühlen..
Aber hättest du das nicht eigendlich in deinen Garten schreiben müssen und nur den link dazu hier verlinken sollen ?? Ich bin mir jetzt nicht ganz sicher...